Comments on: What Your Headlines Are Missing https://filthyrichwriter.com/copywriting-qa-what-your-headlines-are-missing/ Tips, tools, & training for new and aspiring copywriters. Tue, 04 Jul 2023 07:56:07 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.6.1 By: Nicki Krawczyk https://filthyrichwriter.com/copywriting-qa-what-your-headlines-are-missing/comment-page-1/#comment-352591 Wed, 01 Jun 2016 16:18:32 +0000 http://filthyrichwriter.com/?p=3670#comment-352591 In reply to Jim O’Connor.

Hi Jim,

I agree; it’s important to use the knowledge you have about your target audiences to convey that benefit in a way that’s going to speak to them—in languag they use and through insights about their circumstances. And, yes, a martini or two never hurt. 😉

Thanks for commenting!
Nicki

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By: Jim O'Connor https://filthyrichwriter.com/copywriting-qa-what-your-headlines-are-missing/comment-page-1/#comment-351614 Tue, 10 May 2016 20:01:57 +0000 http://filthyrichwriter.com/?p=3670#comment-351614 Ha, you’ve got me thinking,…the deep emotional benefits of a cheese grater??

Only thing I’d add is to somehow express those benefits in a way that’s surprising and unexpected. You probably have to walk away from the problem and loosen up a bit. A martini or two might help…

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By: Nicki Krawczyk https://filthyrichwriter.com/copywriting-qa-what-your-headlines-are-missing/comment-page-1/#comment-350894 Tue, 26 Apr 2016 17:48:01 +0000 http://filthyrichwriter.com/?p=3670#comment-350894 In reply to Eleanor.

Hi Eleanor,

Great point! A perfume purchase can have some *very* powerful emotions behind it—good thinking!

Thanks for commenting!
Nicki

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By: Eleanor https://filthyrichwriter.com/copywriting-qa-what-your-headlines-are-missing/comment-page-1/#comment-349387 Mon, 28 Mar 2016 18:24:25 +0000 http://filthyrichwriter.com/?p=3670#comment-349387 Great post, and extremely important point!

Now you might have intentionally written this line: Now, is everything going to have a deep benefit? Probably not. It’s hard to come up with a deep benefit for perfume or cheese graters, to elicit a response, so here is mine:

Perfume has many deep benefits, as you can see from all the perfume labels and names: Euphoria, Romance, etc.

It’s about bringing out your inner attractiveness in a tangible fragrance.

It’s adding power to your attraction.

It’s seduction at times.

It’s selecting the emotions you would like to evoke in others.

And this is just at the surface!

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